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Post by itachuchiha on May 11, 2008 9:52:52 GMT -5
a black mist starts to go over oni village as a red moon goes in the sky then all of a sudden the gates to oni village burst open and zaneku walks in alone he walks up to the guards that are now running at him and he smirks as he pics one of them up by the neck and throws him trought a brick wall then the other guard trys to stab him with a oni blade zaneku jumps on top of the oni blade that the guard was holding and kicks him in the face as zaneku flips in the air have way up side down he throws a kunia that hits the guard right in the eye then after taking care of both guards he walk casualy to the onikage house (aka his brothers house zaneku is mazukus bro for anyone who did know) then he knocks on the door smiles at the guard that peeks throught the crack in the door ZANEKU: well its a nice day we are having isn't it GUARD: uuuummmmmm............ yyyyyy you are not aloud to be here iiiiii iiiiii im going to have to assss assssk you to leave right now ZANEKU: so u are telling me i cant see my dear little brother who i haven't seen for months now GUARD: NO!!!!!!! I SAID LEAVE BEFOR I HAVE YOU KILLED ON SITE then zaneku smirks ZANEKU: ok now we dont have to get testy are you on you period as he said that zaneku starts to laugh GUARD: IF YOU DONT LEAVE RIGHT NOW I WILL HAVE NO CHOOSE BUT TO KILL YOU zaneku smirks at the guard ZANEKU: well then i guess i have no choose but to leave o well i tryed then zaneku starts to turn around then moves so fast all you can see is that zaneku is inside now and the guard is hanging from the top of the hokage house by his neck ZANEKU: now were is that little brat of a brother then zaneku walks up and sees.............. (TB:anyone no atacks at first)
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Post by Moongem on May 11, 2008 14:26:51 GMT -5
Mazuku sits on his big chair, snoreing as Zaneku stands before the throne of Onigakure. Mazuku's eye begin to slowly open and he see's Zaneku standing down their "Zaneku.... ughhh I don't like when I wake up and the only person I see is my older brother" Mazuku awakens a little bit more "I'm gonna just say Hell to guards... they die to damn easy."Mazuku stands up and yawns and pulls a kunai out and throws it down the hallway to the main entrance to the palace and cuts the rope the last guard was being hung by, the guard lands on the floor and quickly stands up and runs away. "What he do? You know what I don't care what he did." Mazuku looks down again and sees Zaneku once more "Hi" Mazuku stares at his older brother and again yawns.
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Post by itachuchiha on May 22, 2008 19:15:48 GMT -5
ZANEKU: well little bro i have come to destroy oni village as you can see your not getting out of the house because my new friend sasinaru sinari so and he is setting the rest of the village on fire as we speek so little bro its just me and you once again
then zaneku puts hsi hand up ready to fight and looks at mazuku right in the eyes and smiles [/color]
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Post by Moongem on May 28, 2008 5:27:17 GMT -5
Mazuku returns the Smaile "So this is what it has come to,, eh Brother" Mazuku walks forward down a flight of stairs
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Post by itachuchiha on Jun 9, 2008 13:27:12 GMT -5
Zaneku grabs mazukus sholder and looks him in theyes and smiles
ZANEKU: little brother this is were oni village will fall im here to destroy it and if you get in my way i have no problem killing you so it would be in your best interest brother to just back down before i have you killed
Then mazuku hears a loud explotion out side the palace and sees a tall ninja punching holes in the palace gates yelling DIE MAZUKU
ZANEKU: i see my friends is here well now you make your choose or i will have no choose but to let him kill you[/color][/b]
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Post by Moongem on Jun 15, 2008 2:28:31 GMT -5
Mazuku returnes Zaneku's look "Just try it, I'll take you and your buds" Mazuku pushes Zaneku's hand off his shoulder and thinks to himself "This gonna be interesting"
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Post by itachuchiha on Jun 17, 2008 16:23:15 GMT -5
Mazuku hears zanekus voice in his head " yea little brother it will be interesting" mazuku is wondering how zaneku is talking to him with out moving his mouth. then mazuku looks over at were zaneku was standing but zaneku is no longer there then he turns around and right as he turns around he feels a sharp pain hit him in the stomic making him fly away and hit the wall . then he looks back up and he sees zaneku smileing and seting in his hokage chair
ZANEKU: well little bro your move
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Post by Moongem on Jun 17, 2008 16:34:45 GMT -5
Mazuku's body begins to ripple like water Mazuku looks up and glares at Zaneku, Mazuku's body begin's to ripple more and more. Mazuku places his hands together "Oni Style:Black Water Manipulation" Dark Water runs of Mazuku's body and collects at four separate points around his body and rise up in sharp spear like shapes. Mazuku directs the Water spears at Zaneku's face, Mazuku looks at Zaneku through the black water with a grin.
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Post by itachuchiha on Jun 17, 2008 16:43:16 GMT -5
Zaneku smiles as the sprears come at him then as one of the spears get close he does some hand signs at moc speeds and he grabs the first spear to reflect the last three then with out hesitation zaneku moves so fast mazuku can see him then he feels a sharp pain in his sholder then mazuku looks down to see his own black water spear in his sholder and zaneku standing behind him with a grin
ZANEKU: well not bad but you are a little to slow so stop playing around little brother
then zanekus body is gone and mazuku sees him seting bakc down in the hokage chair
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Post by Moongem on Jun 17, 2008 16:56:49 GMT -5
Mazuku looks at Zaneku with deep blue Sharakugan, "You can't fool my eye's" Mazuku copies his older brother's speed with his eye's and grabs him by the scruff of his coat and pulls him up. "Leave Now." Mazuku again uses Zaneku's speed and knee's him in the gut. Mazuku's grin vanishes and he runs towards Zaneku but simply passes him and runs towards the door and kicks it open with electricity pulsing around his hand "Chidori!"
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Post by itachuchiha on Jun 17, 2008 17:06:45 GMT -5
as mazuku opens the door he notices that he is back in side the hokage palace looksing at zaneku holding his stomic
ZANEKU: DAMN YOU LITTLE BROTHER YOU DONT GEWT IT IF YOU GO OUT THERE YOU ARE GOING TO DIE FOR ONCE IN YOU LIFE LISEN TO ME DAMNIT !
Then zaneku gets up moves even faster and hit mazuku 28 times in the stomic with a flaming left fist and a electric right fist then flashes behide him and corndogs him so he goes up in the air
ZANEKU: NOW DAMNIT IM HERE STOP TRYING TO LET ME LIVE YOU STUPID PIECE OF TRASH I KNOW WORMS THAT ARE SMARTER THEN YOU NOW BRING IT !
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Post by Moongem on Jun 17, 2008 23:12:34 GMT -5
Mazuku looks at Zaneku "Okay brother, but no more Gen-Jutsu" Mazuku touches his left shoulder "Curse Seal Level 1!" Flame marks cover his body . "Curse Seal Level 2" The Flame marks connect and his skin turns gray and giant hand like wings sprout from his back. "Curse Seal Level 3!" The wings shed their skin off and form Black feathers wings and sleeve from Mazuku's elbow to wrist appears and glows bright white. Mazuku screams uncontrollably "4!" Mazuku's hair grows down and his eyes turn shining silver and his skin tone returns to normal color and a long shining silver sword rises out of the ground and into Mazuku's hand and on Mazuku's right hand a white incarnation of the word Demon appears, as well as on of Mazuku's wings turns white. Mazuku lifts an inch off the ground and looks at Zaneku with half closed silver eyes. Mazuku lifts the sword up and puts it up to his neck " This sword is called Kuraionikumo and with it I can unleash the worlds strongest Electrical based Jutsu, prepare yourself to witness the fall of heaven and rise of Hell" Mazuku moves the sword towards Zaneku and places his other hand on the swords handle. "Heaven Hell Style: Shocking Thunder Downfall" White and Black lightning surround Kuraionikumo and Mazuku disappears.
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Post by itachuchiha on Jun 18, 2008 0:10:34 GMT -5
Zaneku starts to smirk
ZANEKU: well well well about damn time you grow soem balls little bro and fight like a man
Then zaneku begins to chant in a really old language getting ready for the rise of hell as zaneku is chanting his hair starts to blow up in the air and his eyes turn pitch black and his voice changes as black flaming horns burst from his skull
Zaneku: brother hell is about to get a rude awakening now bring it brother
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Post by Moongem on Jun 18, 2008 0:33:48 GMT -5
"You have NO IDEA!" Mazuku voice echo's through Zaneku's ears as he bust a hole strait thorugh the Onikage palace. Mazuku's sword started to vibrate wildly and stabbed towards Zaneku's chest and yelled "DIE" Mazuku's speed surpassed Zaneku's 100 fold and the whole Onigakure shook. Mazuku lodged his blade in Zaneku's chest and grabbed his newly grown horns and pulled his head towards a wall. "Heaven: White Flame of Eternity" Zaneku's body caught white flames and Mazuku kicked him in his stomach and he flew back. Mazuku appeared in front of Zaneku and grabbed Zaneku's throat and lifted him up "Stop your pathetic chanting, you cunt" Mazuku throw Zaneku at a nearby wall and stared at Zaneku.
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Post by itachuchiha on Jun 18, 2008 10:49:23 GMT -5
Zaneku8 gets up coffing up blood then grins at mazuku "well little bro i see you have got better but if that was you strongest lightning move you have alot to learn still now little bro im giving you one more chanse eather back down and let me destroy oni village or i will have no choise but ot kill you make your choise bro" as zaneku poofs and then is on top of the palace waiting for mazuku to deside
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Post by Moongem on Jun 18, 2008 11:52:20 GMT -5
"Of course" Mazuku shuts his eyes and looks towards the ground "I pick option two, I will protect this village till my death" Mazuku uses his black and white wings and soars towards the top of the palace and sees Zaneku . Mazuku Places his left hand on top of his right hand as lightning covers his arm "Chidori" Mazuku looks towards Zaneku with his Silver eyes glistening in the light "I will stop you" Mazuku dashes towards Zaneku and thrust his arm forward. With his hand about two inches away from Zaneku's chest Mazuku ends the Chidori and clechs his hand into a fist and sluggs Zaneku in the chest "My Tai-Jutsu is weak... I am sure that didn't hurt." Mazuku rises his sleeved hand towards the sky lightning begins to strike around the area of Onigakure-no sato. Mazuku stares at Zaneku as the lightning begins to strike his hand and he, what looks like holding, the lightning. "This will....hurt. Kirin" Mazuku starts to fall out of the sky towards Zaneku at an incredibly high speed "This is the worlds strongest known Lightning based Jutsu, The Kirin" Mazuku's body disappears and reappears in front of Zaneku.
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Post by itachuchiha on Jun 18, 2008 12:02:01 GMT -5
Zaneku jumps on mazukus hand crushing it on the ground then with his outher foot kicks him in the temple with a mach kick then jumping of his crushed hand hell style: hell flame birds which made 700 flaming phoenixs that are falling from tyhe sky right at mazuku and if he dodges them the palace will be destroyed and if he trys to hit them they will explode and cover the whole village in flames 10X hotter then amaterasu then zaneku lands back down on mazukus back crushing him further on the ground then while standing on him he grabs one of the the wings and begians to rip it off mazukus body with one hand as the other is holding a kunai and zaneku stabs it in mazukus back as zaneku is doing this the peonixs are getting 10 inchs away from mazuku and zaneku then zaneku throught the kunai in the middle of mazukus back hitting his spin making him parilized for 5 second just long enough for the peonixes to hit him
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Post by Moongem on Jun 18, 2008 12:14:34 GMT -5
Mazuku kicks Zaneku off of him and smacks him with his wings on the way up towards the fire balls Mazuku looks at the pheonixs and puts his hands together "Multiple Shadow Clone Jutsu" Thousands of Mazuku's dash at the Pheonixs "I will protect my village! That is MY ninja way!" Mazuku makes contact with the Phonixs and covers them all with clones and shrunk the explosion. Mazuku's body fell towards the ground
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Post by itachuchiha on Jun 19, 2008 19:31:54 GMT -5
zaneku smiles at mazuku "well i have to say little bro you got guts but you are really stupid but bro now im done goofing around" then zaneku poofs and moves so fast all you can feel is air move by you then mazuku feels feet on his stomic pushing him harder towards the ground then as he feels feet on his stomic then he sees a black circle on the ground that he is falling right onto and he is having trouble breathing "now little bro if you wish to die then you will move if you wish to live dotn move thsi will just give you 3 degree burns your choise" mazuku heres this sound from the air but dotn see zaneku anywere. " now little bro here is how it will work you move then a amitirasu blast will implode in your stomach but if you fall and let it hurt you then the blast inside will come out and vanish so i advise you to now move, but on the other hand if you dotn move when you hit the black circle you are falling to it will blow up half of the village and all most all the villagers make you choise"
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Post by Moongem on Jun 19, 2008 19:48:50 GMT -5
Mazuku slowly opens his eyes. He looks down towards the village " I will never allow harm to come to my home and villagers" Mazuku places his hands together "Dark Emissinary Technique" Mazuku's body starts to seperate in to thousands of tiny purple orbs and shows the Amaterasu his body reappears above it and he pulls out a scrool and seal's it in. Mazuku flaps his Black and White wings and soars upward and looks around "Sharakugan" Mazuku closes his eyes and focuses and opens his eyes and sees a shiny flash for just a second and closes his eyes again and focuses once more. Mazuku pulls a Kunai out of his pocket and opens his eyes and throws the kunai at the flash nailing Zaneku in the leg. Mazuku puts his hand on his face covering his eyes in pain. "Time to end this little play time" Mazuku moves his hand down towards the ground and his sword rises to him and he clasps it in his hand tightly "Lets Go" Mazuku moves slowly towards Zaneku.
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Post by itachuchiha on Jun 19, 2008 20:06:59 GMT -5
but then mazuku looks one more time and he sees the zaneku he hit in the leg fall and poofs then he sees he hit one of his own villagers " now i thought you said you would not hurt anyone of your villagers or your village now that must really suck o well" then mazuku turns around and sees zaneku settign in a bench drinking saki " now little bro you are so rude to you village what kind of hokage is that" then zaneku poofs and again and reaperse right in front of mazuku then zaneku pokes mazuku in the head and poofs back to the bench and begains drinking saki again " now brother if you dotn mide but my friends want ot have soem fun with you so im going ot set in this bench and drink my saki but as for you i would be carful" then mazuku turns bakc around and sees two ninjas standing right infront of him the two ninjas vanish and all you hear is there voices " Mazuku ! mazuku ! i have waited for a long time to kill you, "now sasimaru dont be so hasty" " now boys stop playign with ym brother you want to kill him so get ot it before i have to pick up your hurt bodys" " ok mister zaneku we will get to it" then zaneku and the other two ninjas vanish and all you can hear is there voices.
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Post by Moongem on Jun 20, 2008 4:00:43 GMT -5
Mazuku looks around looking for The other two "Too scared to fight like men?" Mazuku focuses his chakra and makes an explosion of energy "Seeing you or not i will protect this village"
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Post by itachuchiha on Jul 22, 2008 22:36:45 GMT -5
" i want ot kill him zaneku i want to kill real bad plez zaneku he needs to die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "now sasimaru dont go to crazy plus i bet he could kick your crazy blood thursty ass" zaneku starts to laugh as he turns back to normal " wow you to argue like a merryed couple" " shut up lord zaneku" "yea y u be mean to me lord zaneku" zaneku smirks " well my bro is true you guys do the same thing every time you come you hide from your oppent" "well so he is a little brat you said your self lord zaneku" " well true he is a little spoild brat but he is still my brother" "who cares i want mazuku blood now plez lord zaneku let me taste his blood on my hands" "all in good time but for now this is my fight and i wish to fight alone go back to killing villagers like good little boys or you guys wont get any food when we get home" as they both say "yes lord zaneku" "now for you brother you are qwite troblesom and all im here to do is take over is that that hard to understand i mean dont go and have a pissy fit o and i have you know im not here to kill you im here to fake kill you im not even here ot take over that is what kinzuno wants but you will get to know him in do time. and my sasimaru guy he just hates the piss out of you and want your head as a gift for his birthday. now brother i can fake kill you the easy way or the hard way but im tierd of this boring pratice match you have no idea how much i have learn being with kuro so im giving you your LAST FuckIN CHANSE FACK YOUR DAMN DEATH BEFOR I HAVE TO TRY BROTHER!!!!!!!!"
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Post by Moongem on Jul 26, 2008 2:42:21 GMT -5
"Call off your people from my villagers, they have done nothing Zaneku. If you do we can fake my death for them." Mazuku looks at his older brother "And since I know you come in peace I have some bad news." Mazuku looks towards the ground. "Onikaru has left us.... he left and joined the Neo Akatsuki after Riku's son, Reizo, left the blood village and joined the Hakumei Seidei, I haven't seen Riku sence." Mazuku smiles "Its good to see you again brother, I was happy to hear that you and Kuro split ways." Mazuku's body returned to normal.
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Post by itachuchiha on Jul 26, 2008 19:48:17 GMT -5
Zaneku gave a half grin "so ur telling me that my nephew is in the damn neo akatsuki and you have got to be kidding me riku is back what the hell god i missed alot well after o go deal with my damn nephew and it is good to be back but watch this" then zaneku smiles and mazuku closes his eyes and opens them again and sees every thing is fix and nothing ever happen and zaneku is stetting in the throne laughing "well brother i must be going it was nice seeing you again but i have ot go deal with my little brat of a nephew now" then black smoke surrounded zaneku and the smoke vanished and zaneku was gone and all he left was a box with something inside when mazuku opend it it was a neckles holding yen in it with a note saying for you brother you old friend yen my little wolf i have my yang wolf with my so u have the white neckles and i have the black one i will see you so and i will bring onikaru back with me i promiss on my life with that.
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Post by Moongem on Jul 27, 2008 2:59:39 GMT -5
"Thanks Zaneku" Mazuku smiles and lifts up the neckles and placed the thread with the pure white stone around his neck and looks out of the Onikage estate and sees that the village is still at peace and sighs "Well I've managed to get past another visit from Zaneku without the people getting hurt" Mazuku cracks a smile and returns to the throne and looks at the neckles "So this is how Zaneku ended Yenoshi ten years ago, he split them back into Yen and Yang." Mazuku looks around his room and quietly falls to sleep again
CHAPTER END
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